Sunday, November 24, 2013

Try, try again

I have done the opening paragraph one more time.  My biggest challenge is that my organization is humanitarian health aid/health education focused but the funder they want is development focused with an insistence on not providing welfare of any kind.  This project entails both making the rhetorical situation challenging.  I'm shifting my talking points.


I would like to know if I have adequately introduced the context of the problem, the aspect that we intend to address through the current project, the goals, the plan, and the instrumental purpose.



INTER-AMERICAN FOUNDATION
PART 2: NARRATIVE

Families of Shada endured many changes evacuating Port Au Prince after the 2010 earthquake.  Yet, in their new, underdeveloped surroundings south of Cap Hatien many things have stayed the same for disadvantaged women and children, 95% of whom are of African origin.  Women still head households (44% in Haiti) and 62.2 % contribute to the struggling economy through employment and independent work (Committee on the Elimination of Discrimination against Women [CEDAW], 2008).  Beyond the gender discrimination they must struggle to overcome, their contributions to economic development and quality of life are hampered by the same issue that contributes to the highest maternal (350/100,000 live births) and infant (25/1000 live births) mortality rates in the Western Hemisphere. 
Many think of this as a health care system problem; however, to a greater extent it is a lack of community education to equip Haitian women to improve their own health outcomes through the coordination of and informed use of community resources.  MamaBaby Haiti’s (MBH’s) next critical task is to undertake with other grassroots community partners and the Inter-American Foundation (IAF) a pilot education program designed to improve community knowledge of and access strategies for family planning, sexual health, and natal care throughout Shada and 3-7 fishing villages south of Cap Hatien.  This pilot project, which will involve the addition of a mobile clinic to expand the reach of MBH’s established facility, will 1) contribute knowledge to the development of similar service networks in other communities, 2) improve the economic productivity of area women by teaching them how to improve their own maternal and infant health outcomes, and 3) prepare area women through their participation at various levels in the project to lead out in addressing numerous development issues in this region, which has experienced explosive, unmanaged population growth since the 2010 earthquake.

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  2. Better! More to the point, succinct. I like the 3 points laid out, and the verbiage that lays out the urgent need for each piece. You've got a lot of supported facts as well (citations).

    Throughout history, cultures and societies have been developed and grown by women. Educating women is how these kinds of changes are made. This project sounds to me to very much a case of 'teaching a man to fish' vs. 'giving a man a fish'. Great job.

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